Wednesday, 5 March 2014

How I write.

First of all, don't listen to anyone except yourself.  You know if your work is any good, you don't need others to compliment you (but it does help).

lesson 1 

Idea – the idea is the most important part of writing my stories.  To me they usually come out of the blue and very quickly.  I usually write a half page synopsis of every idea.  If the idea is any good it stays with me, I think about it night and day and let it grow in my head. 

Ideas I’ve never written are numerous.  Some ideas stay with you for years.  One of my plays, GRASS took 5 years, until I could get all the components to finish it.  Sometimes it’s because I can’t think of the end.  I think sometimes as I get better at writing I’ll be able to do the really mad ideas I have, I’m not good enough yet.

Ideas come from every where, friends, family, personal stories (Grass), internet, newspapers, photographs, flyers (walk this way). 

Lesson 2

Research - the world, the characters, the story.  I use the internet, the library and then I talk to people.  This time can take months, its writing but in your head mainly.  At night before I go to sleep I think about the problems in my story and I try to solve them. 

Who are the characters, where do the characters live, work, their age, etc?  The answers to these questions shape your story and the lives of the characters.  

I write a graph for my characters like this.  Every new play I start writing notes about the story.  The notebook and the graft is a great source of information if I’m stuck. 

I also write the story scene by scene where my hero is going - From Knife Edge  
          Brian turns up and sets up theatre  
          Brian gets annoyed by Alan, Brian invites Alan on stage.

I don’t always stick to this, but it helps. 

Lesson 3 

Write – Before I write I need to know the end so I know where I’m going.  Think of it like a journey, get everyone in the car and set off to your destination.  Along the way you might meet some interesting characters, your car might break down or there might be a massive diversion, but you always know where you’re headed. I think how it is best to start (usually slowly as an audience need time to settle) the middle part I make up as I go along; it’s the organic stage that I love.  If you’ve done your research the middle should come easier.   I like to get a first draft finished quite quickly no matter how bad it may be.   After I’ve written something I usually leave it alone for a week or two then I come back to edit. 

What is it about?  If a play were about love I would examine and explore the depths and widths of love.  Self love, young love, obsession, loathing, lost love,  

We write drama – what is drama?  It is conflict, things rubbing against each other.  One says yes, the other says no.  So my love story wouldn’t be boy meets girl they live happily ever after – that’s boring.  

Lesson 4

Edit – when I edit I start with first draft and rip it to bits.  Never be scared to take things out, if it doesn’t work cut it.
      Find out what the plays about?
      More in-depth Research, is the world and characters plausible?  I want an audience ideally to believe me and be carried away with the story and my characters.
      Smooth out the scenes, most of my first drafts are disjointed, I might repeat myself.
Re write.  I have never finished writing a play yet.  Even as the play is being performed I’ll still be thinking, tinkering.   

Lesson 5

Structure - You need tension and excitement as well as climaxes.  


and finally...

Rehearsed reading – if you’re planning to get the play on, try and get people to help you listen to it.  Plays are to be played by actors and actors are great at finding all the holes for you.  When a play is cast the actor will concentrate all the attention on their part, they will underline or highlight only their words or their actions, that’s what they’re (we’re trained to do).  If an actor comes up with something better steal it, the play will always have your name on it.  Knife Edge was read in front of an audience of actors, writers, producers and directors – it was very nerve wracking, but a good way to pick their brains. 


I have a CSE in English 




My story would be like Romeo and Juliet – two lovers who can’t be together because of their families.  

Tuesday, 4 March 2014

Say No

9.30am
I need to learn to say no.  I need to learn to say no.

This morning I took a 2 hour trip to Salford's Media City to do an interview "down the line" to BBC radio Derby.

I need to say no, instead of this tail wagging, conforming idiot that wants to please everyone.

So, I walk into Salford studios ready with my spiel, ready with a piece of "content" for this organisation that I hold so dear, ready with my wit sharpened by a Costa coffee and I wait.

I need to be my own future, that's what angers me.

And I wait.

I need to control my artistic destiny, to please me not the world, if they like it then so be it, if they don't then so be it, but at least I will be happy.

And wait, until I get the green light, the go, the nod.  Headphones over my hearing aid and I'm ready for this.....

6 minutes.


6 minutes.


2 hour drive, 30 minute wait for 6 minutes.


I need to learn to say no thanks and blow their content.


17.30pm
Just found out that BBC television heard my tiny piece on the Radio and are running the story this evening, seems I got it wrong again - from tiny acorns...

Thursday, 6 February 2014

I'm feeling militant.

I believe that theatre should be energised, exciting, an adventure. I believe that when the lights go down we should create a playground.
I believe that audiences want to travel with me, to escape their normal lives’ and join in my adventure. I believe that learning through art should be entertaining.I believe that we should inspire our audiences to make the world a better, kinder, stronger place.

I have put stories everywhere, in houses, in barns, in fields, shops, schools and a few theatres. I have inspired writers, educators and directors; I’ve put issues under the spotlight and educated many. I have teased audiences and turned my back on the system that creates mundane fodder. If you dare to ask an audience, to speak to them honestly you will be amazed where they want to go and what they want to see and feel. My story begins when the audience engages and it finishes years down the line.

Mark WhiteleyActor/Writer/Producer

Tuesday, 4 February 2014

Maverick As Ever



If you have been around from the start of Hard Graft and seen the living room tour, the walk, the Polish Adventure, the charity shops and the old Redmayes and Todd shop we turned into the coolest place in Notts for a month, you'll know by now that I don't do things "normally". Normal is for everyone else, normal is for all those others. Don't get me wrong I like normal, it's comfortable, but I don't want to be it. You are like me, a maverick.

You know I am in love with stories, from sitting listening to my family tell of their adventures to blockbuster movies. Stories make us tick, God knew it with his Bible, then came the Quran (please, I don't know about the time line of religion, I'm just making a story comparison and I don't need a Jehad). We all love to hear, read, watch and immerse ourselves in stories. Stories teach and entertain, they excite, rouse and stir.


Let's break out together...


So, Mr. and Mrs. Maverick, this is the first part of a long adventure that I'm about to embark on and I need your help. I need your stories.

If you don't send me them all this will come to nought, so please take 5 minutes and send me your tales.

I can read stories if you Facebook or email me hardgraft@gmail.com
You could send a video or a voice recording or you can PHONE in your Fables - 0161 652 6026


Could be work related. I was told a story about a lad with learning difficulties who locked the meter reading man in the cellar as he thought he was an Hobbit.


Personal stories. I know a couple who separated for a month because neither had ever experienced another partner. The plan was a month of complete freedom then get married.

My youth. I went on the run from the Police for 24 hours after I was ordered to appear as a witness in court.


Thursday, 16 January 2014

Time for something different

I believe that theatre should be energised, exciting, an adventure.  I believe that when the lights go down we should create a playground.  I believe that audiences want to travel with me, to escape their normal lives’ and join my missions.  I believe that learning through art should be entertaining. I believe that we can inspire our audiences to make the world a better, kinder, stronger place.  When I tell my Children a story at bedtime I always put them in it, to be in the adventure is far, far more fun.

Over the last twenty years I have put stories everywhere, in houses, in barns, in fields, shops, schools and a few theatres.  I have inspired writers, educators and directors; I’ve put issues under the spotlight and educated many.  I have teased audiences and turned my back on the system that creates mundane fodder. 

If you dare to ask an audience, to speak to them honestly you will be amazed where they want to go and what they want to see and feel.  My story begins when the audience engages and it finishes many years from now.